Saturday, February 22, 2014

WRITE TRIBE - "55 On Friday" & "100 Words On Saturday"



I'm writing with Write Tribe today for my first time ever and boy was it challenging! I loved it! Besides, I'm always up for a challenge, are you? 


The Prompt - How I wished


THE DANCING GYPSY'S "55"


The reunion brought them face to face. In her eyes he saw their bond of pain and heartache. "She turns eleven this year." Todd pulled her close. "We were kids Kelly. How I wished.."
"Daddy!" Todd lifted up his little boy and Kelly smiled wiping a tear.
"I always knew you'd be a great dad. 

The Prompt - H/She's The Lucky One

THE DANCING GYPSY'S 100 WORDS

“Shut up. You don't know everything.” Danny's punch landed hard on Troy's jaw. He stumbled to the bar and ordered another shot of whiskey. Troy sat next to his best friend, his jaw swollen but not broken. “You're right. I don't know everything but I know she left without saying good-bye.” Danny sat silent, staring into the mirror behind the bar. Troy put his hand on Danny's shoulder. “Look, all I'm saying is that you're lucky you found out before the wedding, right?” Danny smirked and raised his glass to the couple in the mirror. “No, he's the lucky one.”

That was a lot of fun and I hope I did it correctly! I provided links to Write Tribe if any of you would like to give it a try. I hope you will. I'd love to read your posts.

9 comments:

  1. Hi, I am popping over from the grid at Write Tribe. I think you missed the prompt for the 55-word post: 'How I wished'.

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  2. Oops! Yes I did! Looks like I'll have to get busy! Thank you!

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  3. Loved both stories Dancing Gypsy! Life is full of surprises, isn't it??

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  4. Good ones, Dancing Gypsy ! A happy happy one, and a realistic one :) Good going !

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  5. Psych B - Thank you and yes it is!

    Sreeja - Thank you!

    I'm looking forward to the next prompts!

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  6. Love both of them and so well written. Flawless:)
    http://vishalbheeroo.wordpress.com/2014/02/23/two-today-package-on-write-tribe-55100-ers

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    1. Wow! Thank you! I wasn't sure what to do. This comment makes my day! :)

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    1. Thank you Nabanita. I can't wait to do some more!

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